The quality took a tremendously steep rise in quality in Ch 1-20. The story goes into more detail about the cultivation and training process than any novel I read so far. The realism in combat techniques is decent and more than I can ask for from someone who does not train. Better than immortal mortal in every quality, characters, realism, detail, and generally what the rules for the powers of cultivators are. No pointless exposition and a flawed but likeable mc. Author puts time into his chapters and doesn't mass release in exchange for quality. I can see a rise in quality if the author puts more thought and planning into both how the mc develops his skills, interacts with others, and matures over time. Ideas are good, but execution and taking the time to break down every part of the journey in a fun and interesting way is what makes a truly unique novel. A rival / friend that pushes the mc to greater heights is 100% more interesting than the concept of talent. Please, I love your book, never give it up