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I though it was pretty  interesting and I liked the story concept in a way. But I can see the reason why people wouldn't want to read it because  of the way the MC acts. Although  It does add character and a good story to read making you want to see what happens next.
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Potential harem warning, and with tsunderes. The tactics employed by the MC are rash and with little logic, such as letting the Gnolls attack at night despite them having night vision because "If they want a fight, give it to them" logic that only serves to "bolster" MC's image to the viewer. Plot armor is also a thing, and non of the town building stuff goes indebt despite all the screens, like why the towns people he summoned don't question anything after suddenly coming to existence, people from actual Greek suddenly came onto shore and just acted like nothing happened and followed the MC just cause. Author also doesn't know any real history, as apparently the only thing he watched was 300 and thinks that all Spartans just wear red robes, when they wore a chest guard and helmet; in this novel MC also makes Spartans throw javelins and then rush with daggers, which is just wrong on so many levels, like how Spartans never carried daggers, or how they mainly fought in formation with and didn't just bum rush with these so called daggers, they had swords, but not daggers. The translation is also pretty bad, sentences just stop for some reason without any context and words are freely swapped around, what's worse is that numbers are also swapped, like in the beginning MC is saved by Spartans, then when showing town info it says he has 0 spartan soldiers, then later says he has 80. These are only some of the issues affecting this novel, it's a novel you'd force yourself to read once you can't find anything else. It had a decent start with a semi-smart MC not thinking with his dick and actually having some form of planning, then it became a Lords Empire.
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Where is this book?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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I should say its nod bad compare to the legendary mechanic keep up the goodwork. Hope you can update more frequently so yeah thats all from me good luck
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Great story! and the first chapter is very interesting. Apart from that, there is a lot of progress to be made grammar wise but as long as you keep writing you will improve.Good luck author!
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  The girl pushed her away. "Hehe, sorry." Mei giggled. "Ruby ... Ruby ... Oh yes, Ruby
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Kyouma found the darkness to be abnormally stuffy. He turned on the flashlight attached to his helmet. Up ahead he could see a derailed train car. Rusty bars lined the walls and roof of the car, while decrepit suitcases, old newspapers, and shattered glass cluttered the broken ground. There was no shortage of bodies around either.
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Hindi ko maipaliwanag ang kaba at takot na nararamdaman ko sa ngayon. Mas matindi pa pala ang takot na mararamdaman mo kapag 'yung isang lumang kwento ay bahagya mo ng mararanasan or baka may sakit lang ako sa OA.
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The line from the letter which struck him the most wasn't directed to her new wife but about the fruit of Nathaniel and Sarah's love. Nathaniel explained it to his family, they were upset at first but his wife cannot blame a motherless child and his children cannot stay mad for a long time to their half-sister. They treat Rowena as their family and the relationship among Nathaniel's new family and Rowena improved as the years go by.
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"Stop it!"

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