I want to love it, but I can't. theres way too many arts and things being added every chapter and it's all over the place. it urks me to no end to see him have so many parts and makes it feel super rushed
Woah. That's a surprisingly good plot and story start.Looking forward to the rest.I would advise that you focus a bit in sentence construction, that will increase the whole story by a level because that is the only con I saw.
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I've seen this novel on the promotional shelf, it's amazing. This novel is really cool. It contains a very great character, a tough man. Spirit! I hope the application can provide another promotional slot for your novel
'damn... ini bagaimana caranya aku bisa ke sana' helen bergumam berdiri diantara dua gedung dan tubuhnya tertutup oleh bayangan, ia melihat sekitar, lalu mendongak ke atas. menghirup nafas dan mendapatkan sebuah ide.
