Everyone Tames Beasts: I End Up Taming Diseases - Reviews

The concept is Interesting, but doesn't write the story for you. This will be a lot of work beyond controlling various diseases. Unless you can characterize the diseases so they become an integral part of the story.

Also, this concept has 50% more potential if you can make diseases from the symbiotic bacteria that support and help the larger lifeform they inhabit, and turn them into your Support Pet that gives permanent buffs.

The concept has another degree of potential if you can make layered disease arrays. The idea is to have your probiotic buff colony help control your disease attack colony, taking a lot of the pressure off of you to directly control each instance of your Diseases. With these formations and systems of Diseases, you can recruit and reward allies in addition to tearing down individuals. And it makes surgical strikes possible, rather than just being a Plague Bearer Demon Lord.

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The current story is extremely slow, it’s been 20 chaps and the main character still doesn’t get what his power actually is.The translating quality is surprisingly good for most of it makes sense,the story development is somewhat predictable, of course it’s still is somewhat random but currently 50/50.World building is generic, the author doesn’t even try to make it unique in terms of the world building so far.

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bad story telling and world building but concept is good I feel bored



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The characters are very one dimensional and the story overall reads like a grade school story. It would probably be suitable for young teens to read, but the story line moves so slowly that I’m not sure it could retain their attention. Most of the story reads like a summary of events: Character A did this, Character B did that. At best I can say this is a good framework for a story that needs more scene development and character depth

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It's pretty fun, hopefully it gets picked up.

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Nice start to a good novel! Please continue updating

so, are you telling me that he can give cancer to others?