Even If You Tear Me Apart - Reviews

It’s just ok. I feel like I read something really similar a long time ago where after he opens his share group and saves the CEO’s company he meets and saves the daughter?The he/she thing does seem to be getting worse though. It’s like they’re not even putting in the effort anymore lol.Also, the entitled gold digger thing really makes me look down on people.Hop she’s gone soon.

Great characters and an amazing story, I hope it can keep up the same quality and style.A story that blends modern and ancient styles to create mystery and intrigue.

A good start, found it interesting. Then the author got hit on the head by a flying pig. We get Beasts attracted to the MC. Then we get MC becoming a body cultivator. Then we get MC. All the while, losing the Attractiveness System. It's like playing a MOBA game then suddenly you're playing a Music game, then it changes to a text-based novel game even before completing a level. The shift in story lore Nd background is very disturbing. Very hard to keep track of what is happening. The author might have been going for Inception style of writing, or something like Dr. Strange. Just doesn't go well in writing.

The synopsis got me reading the whole work which I find was a masterpiece. I really loved the flow, let alone the concept of the story itself was very captivating. It allows readers to look forward about what's next to come. A very nice work!

Its a pretty good story, the writing needs a bit of work as I have found a few mistakes here and there. But overall the story great and has potential. Keep on writing

Baadal Billi is not your ordinary piece of writing. It is a journey which takes you into a different dimension of reality where things are not as they seem. It becomes complex in certain chapters yet utterly beautiful leaving you in a state of awe. I am absolutely amazed by story and anxiously waiting for what's about to come .

The pace of the novel is very slow in comparison with other similar novels in the same genre. Same goes for the mc to become stronger if not for the fact that he can fight more than his power allows , Also from the way author is going with novel it looks like it will take months to reach certain arc where mc meets his origin family and with some female character introduced which are possibly future harem members are way above his current power and knowledge which tells it will be a long novel not that i mind because it will be good but if the pace was a bit more than it could have been more enjoyable . like literally it takes so much chapter for mc to just turn from 11 to 12. as far as i have read i.e till chapter 400 it is overall good with some problems which can be rectified in future.

colbob:isn't that invisible breath?

"Any progress?" Jeric asks, oozing with impatience and annoyance.

"Yes."

"Well, what if she truly loves the person. Can you bear to keep her close and yet have her hate you because you won't allow her to marry?" Kade's expression turned grim. He pulled Grin close,

Oliver nodded, but even Alyss could tell that he had a thousand questions he wanted to ask.