Eternal Legacy: The Rise of Jake Galor - Reviews

this is definitely a diamond among diamonds... im whole-heartedly vote for this novel...the plot is nicethe idea is okthe mc is not stupid and wishy (dont compare him to some mc who is weak in front of women, disgusting!!)the supporting characters are so far so goodaddicting story confirmeddefinitely a fast release chapters are requaired

And i thought the mc will be a female. A wishful thinking indeed. ?  I just want another female mc ? almost all of the novel with female mc enters the premium ?? the poor me can't afford those luxuries ?

Enjoyed this when it started but later on, it started devolving into nationalist sturvs (although where I am in it isn't as bad yet) but what started turning me off was when martial arts started coming in. I felt like this was supposed to be a sci-fi or modern advancement novel and then martial art was brought somehow in-between and tried to make it look better than ordinary genetic modification. In one hand I was getting used to gene points and now I'm suddenly hearing dantian

Honestly the story is full of plot holes,  but i loved it. I didn't like the ending though. Well it's good enough for a first work. I hope there was more action in all the individual worlds. Sure hope the author's next work is even better than this.

Writing Quality: 3.5/5 (rounds to 4)Your writing is not made, there are a few mistakes and the wording is either too much added words or worded weirdly. Update Stability: 5/5 I give that too everyone Story Development: 4/5Not bad; the pacing and plotline is good. Your story is very interesting, and the first chapter is hookable which is important.Character Design: 4/5I like your MC, but I still feel a disconnect to him. World Background 3.5/5 (rounds to four)I like the world behind your story, but I feel like I don't know much pertaining to your story; especially with the game.

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Im pumped for more releases. The grammar is surprisingly good and the story itself doesn't seem too bad.Take my stones

Just read the few first chapters, if you keep the current pace I think you should be fine for the future, I hope u get 1 Mil views or something lol

This guy has seen somethings in real life. His combat scenes are detailed, realistic and bloody. He captures the spirit of war, and fighting a hidden one really well. the world of his story blends seamlessly in to ours. What he hints at possibly happening, interweaving real world events in to his narrative is amazing. Love it!

First thing first I love this book so far. Unless I missed some there have been no grammatical errors, while there are some strange events the story development is fluid and well put together and so is the character development there hasn't been too much yet as there only 4 chapters done at the time of this review. Because of how little there chapters are at the moment I can't say anything about the update stability. In terms of the world back ground I don't know much about it because the story hasn't progressed far enough, but after 20 or so chapters I'll come back and update this review. All in all I hope you guys try out this book and have a wonderful reading experience.

''We do not understand it your majesty'' Fu zan asked in a weary voice.

The difficulty finding a connection between the cultivated elements to reach the 80% limit of the Connection Stage.