Eternal Kingdom - Reviews

I came here because of the nice pic, but I stayed because of the interesting story. The story is simply at the start chapter 3, but it has intrigued me. It was actually able to pull me away from continuing writing my own novels.

P.S don't tell my readers I was here. Just taking a breather with this nice story. :)

Only 1 chapter so far so read this with a grain of salt.
writing Quality: 4/5. It'd be perfect, but the author doesn't get her/his right and it took me out my reading flow at least 4 times.
Updates: New novel. Can't judge yet.
Story: 5/5. Sounds like an interesting virtual reality world will soon unfold before us.
Character Design: Both characters are distinct and interesting. Their hair, build, etc. are described well.
World Background: 5/5. We know what world they're in and where the MC stands in it.
Advice for author: Read up on possessive his/her.

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Was already engrossed by the drama that the prolouge had given but then suddenly the MC was forced to use a female avatar...................................................... Error...... Not my type of story...

Im expecting some face slapping after figuring out who is he in the real world after clashing with him in game :) Looking good so far

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Im expecting some face slapping after figuring out who is he in the real world after clashing with him in game :) Looking good so far

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Good one ............................................................................................................................................................