Eternal dusk; Wrath of the Fallen - Reviews

If you can figure out what the author is talking about it seems good.  The issue is you have to Reread everything because you can figure out who is talking or what they are talking about.  Horrible grammar..... MTL would be better in all honesty

I think you've got a really interesting story here, so keep up the good work! I think being a little more descriptive with certain scenes would be helpful, and more frequent updates would be nice, but overall, you're doing great.

This is a great book. i find myself so intrigued in the story as i am reading that i look a the time  one min its say 1pm the i look again to find it's 5pm. the story is aslo well thought out and each characters have well defined personalitys and description that you can seen it in your imagination.

it's like pizza very delicious and well  um.... good? .......................................................................................

Ok guys no need to think if this novel is worth reading. BECAUSE IT’S ABSOLUTELY IS

Super amazing story so far. Her internal struggles for what she wants to do leads a very good development in the story, and the characters' personalities and how they develop are astonishing. Great book, great author. The character design is of course a little cliche, but that doesn't change on how good the story is.

- Make it fast I want the informant.

"Still means I'm older and anyways that was only one of the reasons. The main one is because I love you!"

'That was different from restoring my body by shape shifting. It seems that raising my stats brings forth a natural ability to quickly heal, or at least, raising my stats in my present form has such an effect.'

"Give him my heart."

LUZY (CONT'D)

I started to let go, thrusting faster and harder. Lewd wet sounds emanated from where our bodies met.