Eternal Ashes, Boundless Heavens - Reviews

How can anyone rate this book full of horrodeous grammar 5 stars, seriously? Story is good though, but reading is pain in ass unless edited.

Don't go in! Mcs IQ done ran backwards into infinity^2. Man's should have been dead first day he transmigrated. Don't let this book get put up for translation. Let translation team do something else.

the concept is cool and the hard work is worth praising. 81 chapters is quite an effort. I hope the novel becomes famous and when it does don't forget the duchess. okay!

To me this novel isn't even a sequel to the previous one, you can tell that is written by a different author. It should be treated as a fanmade rather than an original sequel.

An action packed setup for the four chapters published.  Chaotic origin with bad guys showing up (decent forecasting in preceding chapters).  Fits a Warfare SciFi-Adventure genre.  Writing is easy to read.

A Good book. Writing quality is good. Good grammar. World building is fine as well.                                                                       

The Author Here. Currently writing this review to deliver news to you guys. I started this work 5 months ago and had dropped it on the second day itself. and then picked it up 3 months ago. My grammar and English were so childish and cringe back then and I believe I have improved a lot recently because of coming in contact with other fabulous writers. The work is undergoing editing. I have been editing my chapters from the beginning itself one by one. People who read the prologue or people who have already survived (?) through the beginning chaps might find a lot of changes in the starting chapters. Because I have edited it all out. Talking about the editing, I am currently only editing for spelling mistakes, but have already rectified the grammar mistakes of the first chapter. So please readers. Give this newbie a chance and read my hard work as much as you can and support me. I cannot do this without you guys. TRUST ME WHEN I SAY THAT I HAVE BEEN IMPROVING. AAAAAAAAAA(Goes Ultra Instinct)

Hi there, fellow adventurers! I would like to express my sincerest apologies to you for the sudden decline in upload frequency. Worry not, though, as I am not dropping this.I've just been struggling to make ends meet lately and it would really make me pumped up to get back on my feet if you would show your active support through reviews, comments, shares, collections, votes, and gifts.I'm actually constantly somewhere on the Recommended section weekly so I have to thank you all for your love in my work.I'm actually on a mission to get ranked high so I can do another mass release to make it up to you guys and gals.Spread this to all like-minded adventurers out there, and let's go get our MC's memories back together!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

While there is world building at the start, the introduction of Xing Tian as the ‘Asian girl’ is a bit disconnected in the first two chapters. It is systematically written and there is a lot of hard work done on the novel. The novel probably belongs to the cyberpunk genre . Just a personal opinion on my part, it is a nuance but each new character generation tend to be a little choppy at the start. This choppiness isn’t a grammatical issue but rather how the content flows. Fight/combat scenes while described, requires more action, shorter description to give it an ‘action’ feel. However it is my personal preference. Others may prefer in depth descriptions. Overall, nice work!

This review will be based only on the synopsis since haven't read it (not even the chap 1 ?) I like how it was written like a calm before the storm. the conversation between the two was so sweet and innocent yet interesting and expressive.I'm also looking forward to how she'll be featured as the "dancer" her. plus on how they'll meet. it'll be the beginning of all as far as I could see... ?Anyways, Good Day to all... ??

I won't be lying to you guys. The release rate IS the biggest issue for me. I'm having trouble to write chapter, my mind is so stressed out from writing one. I have to plan it out too before writing it and everytime I write, I need to think and revise my own plan, so it took a really long time to write a single chapter.I also apologize if the pace is too slow for you, but I want to properly write my characters' stories.But I can assure you that my story will be exciting, enjoyable, and many other good things you can possibly think!So please give this novel a chance, leave a review and constructive critics so I can further improve myself as a writer.Thank you!