Esse demônio pode ter paz? - Reviews

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: You said "Break of 3-4 Days" but it has been 3 months, I would suggest if/when you come back to this you set it up to update automatically so that such an issue does not likely happen again.Positive Feedback:  Well written well executed story. Good flow, and I don't notice many if any mistakes.;,;.Personal Feedback: I'm honestly not really a fan of novels in which the MC makes their own Harem, and really, I tend to stay away from Harem in general for the most part (w/ exceptions being like "Isekai wa smartphone no tomo ni" AKA "In Another World with my Smartphone" where the Harem was forced upon the MC), therefore I will not be continuing this novel.;,;.

Boring Trash cringe after the girl came......??????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Isn't this the Japanese LN with the same name? If you didn't get legal permission from the publisher to post this here, I suggest you remove this ASAP. Remove it before anyone reports you.

this isn't wish fulfillment ......no this is god tier DREAM fulfillmentidkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts idkwts

It’s a fairly decent novel overall. While the concept is pretty good, it’s also very standard and nothing truly amazing happens in the novel. The writing quality is readable but with plenty of mistakes each chapter. The biggest problem with the story is it just feels lazy, there’s many strange decisions, errors and problems that are in this novel that probably shouldn’t be, in addition the author doesn’t really seem to care about any of that. It’s good for a free novel, but it would not be worth paying for compared to almost any other cultivation novel

I liked the plot, world building but hated all the plotholes. Its not good to dumb down characters just to make dramatic. Commanders cant even use their assets right in an operations inspite having a lot of them. Redundancy and irrelevance are wasted on some of the chapters.

Keep up the good work bes! Suportado ka namin kami bahala sayo! ****************************************************************************

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??WOW!! Wow!! Wow!!! Just Wow!! I love this book too much already. I read the whole thing in one sitting...and can't wait for the next chapter! Its a beautiful story with a lovable male lead. Mystics are among us...a hundred of them ready to save the world from dungeons and beasts. Xavier just happens to be one of them...by accident!??More! Give me more!!!

Great writing and story telling. looking forward to finishing the book.

As Jun was talking Ray interrupted asking "what was the reason?…Did…Didn't she trust me?"

Dan was given the potion with the explanation of what had really happened.