stereotypical sociopathic overpowered MC. the plot has holes the size of Nevada, the story has no development or drive in the first fifty chapters other than the MC patting himself on the back. the MC is literally just someone with no conscience or relatability killing things and becoming "allpowerful
Reviewing my first reading novel, awesome work author did. Especially the characters are unique, the world development start in a steady pace. The typos and errors are negligeable, so anyone interested in weak to strong twilight novel, this is good.
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The writing quality and development could be inproved updates need inprovment on background aswell as character design not bad cherten parts of the chapter could be vastlyinproved
"Aren't you aware on who you are talking right now?" He said once again like he's trying to control himself from strangling me. And it angers me. I lift up my head, walk closer to him so I can meet his eyes closely.
