ERASED MEMORIES: A SECOND CHANCE ROMANCE - Reviews

It had such a good storyline but the author's English level is not very high. There is so many grammar and spelling mistakes it ruins the story. Also the plot is not consistent and the author forgot to search about greek gods. It's a mess. I don't recommend this to anyone. I got headache correcting all the mistakes mentally while reading.

pretty interesting start right off the bat. The protagonist, Touma, is already really strong, and there's no time wasted jumping into the action. I would like to know how he got to this level in the first place, but ill guess ill see that later. the overseers are pretty cool, wanna see more of them too

nice nice nice nice nice niceneed more improvement

I get hooked reading the first chapter, the author does a great job of portraying the mc as a charismatic character. World background? hum. Kinda irked me how the universal empires only consisted of about 1500 planets, like I mean wouldn't that be more of a galactic scale? Maybe I'm just overthinking it, maybe the term 'universal' describes how massive the civilization is, either way, can't wait to see how everything unravels.

duike:ahhh!

Tbh I think being born into ise is overused and being turned into a devil is also I don’t know why people are so scared of oc’s

-three days ago-

10 minutes more and our parents decided to proceed to their main agendas while I and Momo went outside the restaurant to play and talk. Momo was about 10 cm shorter than me, a lot taller compared to other girls her age. I and Momo decided to talk about our quirks first.

Even though Gillian could tell she'd startled him, she was still glad she'd told him how she felt. She knew she could have been more eloquent, but it was too late now to start over.

?? It's ight!!

He could hear sounds at a higher frequency, for him sounds served as a compass pin pointing one's location with an accuracy of 70-80%.

"nothing sir it's unusual to seeing you eat all the food and sir it's time to go far your holiday patrol in the city please be ready!"OK I say go to the dressing room "wait what the hell there is soon many clothes and soo fancy these guy should be a fashion designer never seen such beautyes "I should try one" touch the nearest one outomatically it got in me I looked very fancy.