Good popcorn reading, feels too conversational.. not enough Polish.Feels like the author is so invested in having fun that they're not.. writing, it has its place
this here is a self serving novel, the character is just out right over powered, any and all setbacks are laughed off, and everything is plot armoired away. but the goal of our snake is too get human form, and the path to it goes from chapter 5 to 35, of more or less building every character but the MC, people who we will never see again get more story and character design then the MC.
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