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If your going to MTL, you need to have good editors. Names change from paragraph to paragraph. Nothing is consistent. There's full blown untranslated paragraphs. An entire chapter is repeated with slightly different translation. It's a mess.The sorry itself is nothing to write home about either. Constantly retconning itself; "I gained a lot of experience, and in fact I had taken a 5x experience portion too, that I made with ingredients I bought and never mentioned any of that until after it had already happened."The MC supposedly has future knowledge, but it almost never comes up after the very beginning. The MC's sister is a big concern, then ignored completely. The MC is so OP so quickly there's never any tension. The stats system doesn't get much mention, even though stats are such a big deal, and supposedly the MC is gaining extra points during level up sometimes, those are mentioned once and then never again in the preview 40 chapters.It was already a mess, then it was poorly translated on top of that.
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It had so much potential and it died so fast now author i hate you for causing me pain of nerver ending hunger for new chapters...140 characters
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Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
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Hey Webnovelist!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected].  We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
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[Quest: Get information for the king of Graast Kingdom, Status: Complete]
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She has an authoritative manner that at times is almost arrogant. I watched the interview and hought he seemed quite arrogant. He manages to exude confidence without being arrogant. Like a lot of hospital consultants, he terrifies his patients with his arrogant manner. If I say I'm a leading economic expert, won't that sound rather arrogant? Thesaurus: synonyms and related words
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-Age: 17
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And just quickly jump away to another roof, only to see the carnage that is happening, mostly done by the monsters while the giant black ship just floats there doing nothing basically.
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It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

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