EMPTY-PROMISES - Reviews

a great story can come of this but you will need grammar corrections and an expansion on the story I would recommend that you do not drop this story as it can become a huge hit if reworked

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i like the story till now, it looks slightly fast but its okay but you have to slow it down a bit in the future.also im mad if that foxgirl dies ?doesnt matter if shes a demon or not. just "tame" her.

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I JUST STARTED TO READ THIS BOOK AND ITS OK... I JUST WISH IT STARTED OFF A LITTLE BETTER LIKE IF THE MC GOT  MORE SKILLS AND LET HIM HAVE A BEAST OR GIVE HIM OR WHATEVER?TO AT LEAST SOMETHING TO AT LEAST HELP HIGH  RIGHT AWAY BECAUSE HE SO WEAK AND I HOPE THAT HIS (ADOPTED-MOM) AND HIM DONT DIE!!

I have a rap battle set up with a person in someplace. Hmmm, let us call him Kerk (sorry my sci-fi is kicking in). Anyways, I heard he's pretty good. My cousin told me about him, turns out he's the best rapper in his area. While I'm like the best rapper in all of the north side. I mean, best freestyle rapper, battle rapper. I seem cocky saying I'm the best huh? Well I challenged a lot of the supposedly good rappers to battle and I won. So, even they admit that none of them could beat me in a freestyle rap battle. Only problem is I'm a fucking highschooler. So none of these fucking music producers care about me. I mean I forced one of them to listen to my raps. Then he apologized. He was like "Dude, I thought you were a mumble rapper. Or you had a shitty flow."

"This scent… It's our vanilla macaroon!" Charlotte exclaimed as she recognized the scent. Her father was a famous patisserie and would always bake her his vanilla pastries since it was her favorite. She could never forget the scent of each of her father's pastries!

"Yeah I guess so. Last session we did not qualify the age range. The scientists came last year as well." I remember.

"My mother"

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