Elle devient glamour après l'annulation des fiançailles Ⅱ - Reviews

I like reading this book.If readers like the character reactions & face slapping of "Library of Heaven's Path

Man this world building is total mesh something he shows China superiority in earth ,that understable as novel is Chinese,but then he goes some random continent as well as as Thier is kingdom and nation ,the hell decide first whether it China or some random wuxia continent he mixed world with wuxia type as he is Chinese he try to show Chinese superiority but in next paragraph he goes back to some random nation I got totally confused

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Yah there's potential here, and you can tell it was definitely inspired by "mushoko tensei" which isn't a bad thing, that's how most stories are made. However I just can't, get with the pacing. It goes by 1 year, 2 year, "after three years of doing dah, dah, dah; I have yet to improve. Don't think it to be boring to explain what happens in those couple years. This builds the word around us and let's us get to know the characters struggle.

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So, It's a good story, nothing too outstanding, but the good translation makes it a worth it read...Didn't find any plot holes as of yet, going to keep reading, to see where it goes...

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If you want to read a novel that has a nice construction around rebirth and back-in-time, then you should give it a shot. The author has created a solid way to show us the plot and the concept. I'm following it :)To improve:Writing Quality: It has still some minor issues with the grammatic and punctuations, but nothing that a good rewrite don't fix. All in all, keep up the good work!

"Hisako, you didn't do anything wrong," Kakashi assured her with a hand on her shoulder. "They're just relieved we aren't under attack again. That's all."

His deep thoughts were interrupted by his bully boy, Mo Xung. Mo Xung patted his shoulders, "Bro, wake up from your daydream and look at your Cinderella. She is being bullied by her stepmother...oh..i mean that girl."

"Thank you once more, Jenkins!"