El Lirio Rojo - Reviews

I love this story. Simple as that. But since the beginning of the 5th volume the story has been dragging on and on. It's been a good 240ish chapters since its beginning and we're at the start of volume 6 now (at least for the 'free' chapters) and I can honestly tell you about 1 major arc  that lasted a good 70 chapters that I consider actually progressing the plot while keeping the story interesting. Besides that, and a few other chapters I could honestly consider 150 of these chapters filler waste that no-one will truly remember.

Although the growth of his harem is still a bit too fast. At least, the women have their own back stories. Overall, this rewrite is much better than the original version.

The story from chapter 1 to 9 had an interesting story but after that the story starts to get boring and tangled a lot since in 10 ten chapters not a day has passed

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The last three teams are:

Damn it, they know now where Xiyan's inheritance papers is..... No No No how could they hit her..... Yunshen please save her......I hope Xiyan will tell Yunshen everything and not choose to hide from him for sometime later......

Rias: I…I understand…Dusk…sama…

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

Hawkeye, who was perched on top of a skyscraper a few blocks away, grunted in annoyance as he fired off an arrow into an Ultron Sentry's eye socket, killing it instantly, "We're seeing it."

     Never!                        Never!

This story is a thrilling mix of action, suspense, and character development that pulls you in from the very first chapter. The world-building is vivid, and the dynamic between Ethan and Seojin is both heartwarming and exciting to follow. The plot seamlessly weaves in elements of mystery, with dark forces threatening their lives just as they begin their journey at the academy. The tension rises with well-timed twists, and the characters’ unique abilities make the action scenes electrifying. While the story keeps you on the edge of your seat, there’s also a strong emotional core that makes you care deeply about the characters and their fates. If you’re a fan of fantasy with a dash of danger and a strong bond between protagonists, this is a must-read. The only downside is wanting more after each chapter!