Edge Of The Frozen Dawn - Condensed Version - Reviews

A very good ascender/tower crawl genre, very much like Reincarnator and others like it. I like this genre a lot and this new entry is pretty good. The story is solid and keeps you guessing so far. Not much to say since it's fairly new and it only updates 1 chapter a day I think, and so far the story is progressing nicely. Verdict: Read When You Can.

I love this book. It's so interesting which makes me continue to read. I'm done with the chapters. Still need more author.

When I read the synopsis I already knew this book was going to be great and it didnt disappoint me!I have to get it off my chest and say it again but chapter 2 by far is my fav!The writing style is simple but it has that flow to it that makes the readers feel emotional which adds this amazing feel to the story. The plot is also nice and well developed but I felt like at the beginning it was a bit too fast and I wish we wouldve gotten more info. The world building is nicely done, although there arent many chapters out yet but you can still get a feel for it and it draws you in. A novel worth reading and I recommend it to everyone who enjoy a good story with emotional beats!

This story reminds me of a manga about a man replaced his sister to marry a king. I enjoy the plot so far, but maybe you can learn how to write it in more neat and clean style so the reader can enjoy it more ? Are you, by any chance, from Indonesia?

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.....honestly while reading this novel you would get the impression that it is a mash-up of different novels the difference is that the MC is not have an average appearance but below average downright ugly which is emphasized by the author time and time again and fast relationship intimacy progress, novels like "villainess butler

Well, I don't really write reviews that much but here is my take. The story is solid. Worldbuilding is gradual and not just a huge dump, and MC isn't exactly a "arrogant young master ready to defile every jade beauty underneath the vast sky."Although, one thing that--kind of--ticked me off was the gradual use of Ai in later chapters. I didn't really bother checking but that is what my gut told me, since I have also used chatGPT for various purposes. But eh, other than that, if you can ignore the obvious flaws in the narrative and a few oversights, it's a pretty fun read. + grammar and writing style is also pretty decent. Well decent would be an insult, it's actually good. Hmmm...that's it, I suppose. See ya in some other book. P.S I am writing this review after getting caught up with the free chaps. For some reason my fast passes are not working on PC, so will read more and maybe edit my review later on when I have my phone on me. Cheers.

But, all the same my death came.

Ciel: Bewitched by the eyes of the dead. What terrible luck. It appears I lose a turn.

"Lucy please get up" he said patiently "No I don't wannnaa. What time is it?"I moaned. "Well it's 5:30 Am" he replied calmly

What is he going to do with an extra 7 hours and 30 minutes anyway? Chaldea Security Organization, where he'll be sent, probably doesn't have internet because it is isolated from the rest of the world, and if it does, it's probably monitored anyway...

Calico Jack looked at the board in disbelief. Shrax revealed a Favor he hadn't seen in the hundreds of games he had played. Shrax held up the card and read "Double Blind. If all of your army belongs to one race, gain a number of additional units belonging to another race equal to the number of resource points spent on the first army." As Shrax's already immense army doubled, they both watched a number of tiles on the opposite side of the board come to rest, a higher tier army shifting into view on the frozen tundra.