Edge of Sight - Reviews

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This is the first novel that I regret voting for. This is most stupid novel I have ever seen. I thought that the novel story would become good but every time the next chapter increased the level of stupidity to higher levels. If this novel ever gets premium it will be a total wastage of spirit stones???. The translation work is good which is why I had voted 3 stars to the translation quality.

for some reason, I can't remove this from my library... I tried to remove this novel, with one other, the other novel was deleted, but this one didn't get removed...

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Well great stOry but the world is littrealy ****ed up on this novel evry father **** his daughters a mentally sick husband dont mind his wife getting ****ed roght in front of him (well he is mentally ill so uGgh ok?) i liked the story but this world is so unrealistic SexualY wise

Excellent story! I look forward to the character growth and vivid personalities! If you want a well written apocalyptic BxB or BL etc story then go ahead and pin this to your library!

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Sorry, could not read past the first few paragraphs. I started against better judgment seeing that every word in the synopsis started with a capital letter.  That was not the case in the first chapter luckily, but upper and lower case are not used according to standard English. The formatting generally should be revised. The punctuation separates connected elements into different sentences. Dialogue is written inside the running text without markers when it starts or stops. Etc. I realise this might be due to translation from a language where punctuation and other formatting rules are different. But it takes a lot of energy to figure out the text when it doesn't follow common writing rules at all,  and the risk that the reader abandons it instead is big, which is a pity as the story itself might be good (I marked the other categories as "3" as I could not judge them.)

Zhiyong's heart ached while looking at the little one's face. He was already late for his meeting but he cannot afford to leave Shuyang. The information cannot call for his father's phone since he doesn't know it. So, what they can only do was to wait a little more until something came up to his mind.

"Hello, I am Sara. Nice to meet you!" I said, offering my hand to shake. She looked at me and shook my hand.