EDEN: Dark Universe - Reviews

The story is now getting interesting.

...............good.......book........please............continue...................I..........need.........more.............................yes..........

I love the new book so far. I have read every chapter of all of your books on here. Enjoy your storytelling and gaming aspect of all your books. The only thing I wish is that they had physical copies so I can put them on my bookshelf. My only critique is the same. I always have which is I wish there was more chapters out already because I like to binge read.   That is not bad at all because it lets me look forward to the next release of chapters.

it feels like the novel is being held back greatly by the horrible grammar and I mean greatly. the conversations are so out of touch it makes my head hurt and you don't even know the difference between what they're thinking or saying, its all just mixed up in there

I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~

Anxiously I asked - How sever it is and when will be she wake up?

Without sufficient practice he wouldn't dare to use the martial art, because once he does the loopholes and flaws will be clear for experienced and veteran fighters.

(bigla nilibas ng magnanakaw ang baril at ikinagulat eto ni xenon ngunit dahil sa maliksi syaay agad na naagaw yung baril)

"That's fine and all. I can understand that we cannot go back and should continue living our lives. But what are your plans for now?"

Through the ebb and flow of the pain, a thought kept surfacing in his mind.

Visibly shaken Lucia, didn't know what to say and why Wukong asked this as she thought back to that, moment when she was about 16, the day that her father had been crippled by his opponent in absolute brutality so much so that he couldn't survive the loss of all his energy, and she remembered her brother and mother heading in to attack yet, they were defeated as well.

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