Eclipsed Ascension - Reviews

I only read the first 6 chapters there are several parts that repeat the same thing several times without getting to the point. It seem like explained were dragged out to make longer chapters. I don't think I can read further but the idea of this story is great. The story really needs an editor as well.

please get an editor, while i didnt see any spelling errors which makes me happy, the sentence structure is awful. also please check to make sure that you arent trying to make a wors that doesnt have a plural form into a plural word. preys should just be prey, i didnt see it but please dont use equipments just equipment, etc

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only read a few chapters, it's another story that don't make sense.First Flaw and utterly ruined it for me was that it's a xianxia world, the guy has a system that gave him an op training area that boosts cultivation by 9 times. Guess what instead of using it yourself and becoming strong enough and then inviting disciples (system influences him too using rewards) he invites a guy that he doesn't know anything about and is much much stronger than him and thn reveals the cheat training area and then somehow everything goes fine when he imposes a rule of only 8 hours a day.

I really like your writing style. Easy to read and understand without having to read a paragraph twice. The story is fun...the pace too. Add this to your library if you haven’t yet. Its a good read... waiting for more chapters!

Knock...Knock...Knock...

Instead my eyes were moved away from him more precisely my sight and mind were right behind him to where the other elders were located.

Suddenly a hand Came for saving her with a beautiful Voice and...

"Men of Ithaca, it is all your own fault that things have turned out as they have; you would not listen to me, nor yet to Mentor, when we bade you check the folly of your sons who were doing much wrong in the wantonness of their hearts- wasting the substance and dishonouring the wife of a chieftain who they thought would not return. Now, however, let it be as I say, and do as I tell you. Do not go out against Ulysses, or you may find that you have been drawing down evil on your own heads."

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb