Eclipse of the Immortal Arcana - Reviews

This translator is horrible at updating the chapters some weeks he’ll be on it other weeks you’ll get maybe on chapter every couple of days  I’ve fallowed this from GT and was also paying as a patron to be ahead and even that was messed up with poor chapter releases. Thought things would be different over here but looks like I played myself

24 year old???? This is so amazing. As a detective, overly determined and comitted to her work, she's great. I love where this story is going. Can't wait. ??

The story is kinsda slow until 150sh chapter but the development is well done so fae. I have read until 250 chapters of raw its funny how he is still training until now, he hasnt even gone to college yet. He isnt even OP he got the stats power thingy but he needs to train too, to be the very best :p just like how ash trains for over 20 years and never loses his youthful look. I have rated the world background 3 star as i havent seen much yet of the world building he is still in his highschool years training and expanding his knowledge.

Good popcorn reading, feels too conversational.. not enough Polish.Feels like the author is so invested in having fun that they're not.. writing, it has its place

Don't…Let it fall…

Then ... Niji and Where to sleep together in the room Apartment without wearing birth control first.

"Let`s stop chatting for now father! The attacks are still happening!" (Elasha)

I just don't find myself in many situations where I need to smile in the first place...

I haven't started reading this book but I just added it to my library. But the reason I am writing this review is because I just noticed that the Author's from Nepal. So, consider this review, a support from chimeki.

I'm giving you a rating of 5 because I understand that you're a novice writer, but there really are a few small errors in logic that personally bother me a bit. At the outset of the novel, he refrains from distributing additional bread despite being a "benevolent individual by nature

Nice story, A revenge plot. the chapters were captivating, you did a good job kudos author?

This is a very good novel, very well written, it is totally worthy of praise.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????