Eclipse of Fire & Wings - Reviews

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Basing on the 1st Chapter, it really is interesting, it was really funny when both Owen and Alex talked. Looking forward for more chapters!!

Writing Quality GoodStability of Updates GoodStory Development GoodCharacter Design GoodWorld Background Good..........................

Enjoyed it , it was fun to read .Wanna know more about the world , the mc .Is Hella gonna be important? What about the others introduced? Like her mother .What is the mc's background? It's all a mystery for now , especially since there are only 3 chapters as of this review. But yeah , would recommend it. ?

From what I read the mc is a smart and somewhat weird person, the system is kinda look the same as the system from Thriller Paradise. I think he can get abilities from different movies anime or stories,(Spoiler: He got the Ripple Technique from jojo bizare adventures). When doing missions MC usually use his brain to solve things. These missions is somewhat connected to the weird and un explained things that is happening around.I didn't know how to make a review I just typed what comes in my min (─.─||）

Tang Ling could see beside the artificial landscape, a couple disciple chatting and meditating. By a couple, he meant ten. Ten seemed okay but judging from the last day participants who were around a thousand, it was little and this doesn't include the other days. Third-rate sects, although not popular, would have slightly more than this number of disciples.

Why is it taking so long for new chapters? Please write more chapters in a timely manner. I love the story but you are making us wait to long for the next ones

She could hear it vaguely, the shouting of her master through the mental link, but it wasn't enough.

*swoop*

"Charlotte! What took you so long?" Sherry's voice sounded from behind.

After flying for a day Seth finally stumbled upon a river, seeing this tears almost fell from his eyes. Perhaps they would have if he wasn't so thirsty. Getting on his knees and scooping up some water with his hands, Seth continued to drink it until he finally felt refreshed. Hearing his belly grumble Seth knew he had to find some sort of village or town soon overwise he was going to starve, after all, he hadn't eaten in a few days and he had nothing to cook his noodles. Thinking about it Seth understood that if he followed the river he should reach a village or town after all water is needed for life to thrive.

-Rewards: 50000 points. 50000 xp. 20000 Karma.