Eclipse Dragon: Lullaby of the forsaken - Reviews

Just a few chapters in but I find it intriguing already. I can't wait to know what the bond between Freda and Hardin will end up to be.

Almost 6months.... damn you QI for ruining this good novel hope udeze is still the translator..........................................................

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If you feel like no one cares about you, think again. Look in the mirror because the person you see, needs you more than anyone else.You need to find a person that will accept your flaws and still keep on believing in you.

Its an amazing story with some simple flaws. The setting is similar to ”The Legendary Mechanic” but in a cultivation world. Mc is a npc in a world where players are soon joining. Spoilers ahead: The first flaw in the book is the time discrepancy. The cultivation world and earth have a 5:1 time ratio, yet mc somehow uses a store you can use once every month twice in less than 10 days. Similarly, when one of the players are brought up they are always shown to be streaming without taking into account the time difference between worlds. Finally some glaring huge problem is the fact that mc never tries to study his occupations: Poison Maker and Alchemy. One of the mc villain skills lets him get sort of an aura the more death he has on his hands wether directly or indirectly, and making poison and selling them is an easy way to get a huge body count, but it’s not even considered.

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@chapter 1 i can already feel that mc is a dog,not worth my,if you guys dont't like loser MC's like this better not waste your time reading this

The story is great , the plot , the character development , everything is good if you look at it from another perspective but for me what i don't like about this is just the story is way too slow , like an arc is like 100-200 chapters with different perspective , but overall it's a good novel

"I missed you too, my little rose" he hugs her tight then looks at the man who was staring at them.

"Nani?" he subconsciously said. Then she bit his hand