This novel is terrible, the main character is nothing but a boot-licker, who chases after women. He thinks he is manipulative but is nothing more than a dog. The novel is 90% of boring conversation. I am dropping this novel.
Great sci-fi novel with really good background world building. Everything flows smoothly and is very interesting. I feel that this novel has very good potential in the later chapters, very good, don't want to spoil though, read for yourself.
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So, I tapped the link of your novel and it sent me to chapter eleven. Is this suppose to happen or is there something wrong with your link? Anyways, the author asked for a character review so I'll definitely do his request.Based on what I've read, the character descriptions are decent but I feel like you could add more instead of writing "unknown man" just like in chapter twelve. Perhaps you could write, "A man wearing a coat of black sees Mandeep waking up from the machinery he is attached to. He catches the attention of the man beside him. The strange man murmurs, My ultimate creation is bla bla bla and things like that" Something like that but still, I'll be rating it five stars. Perhaps instead of (:) You could use (") instead.This is just a suggestion and it's still up to you. :)))Keep up the good work and soon you'll be a great author!
first of all I want to say that I enjoy your novel, I like the Mc kindhearted nature that being said I have a few issues that you might want to address ?. 1) despite mc previous knowledge being that he went to college and all even if he didn't study it his lack of common sense is terrible, I mean who makes some national tier potion and sells it dirt cheap. He didn't think about his unique background being the son of a goddess having an effect on everything he does, yes its kind and nice to give away these OP potions but think about all the alchemist that slave away trying to make a decent potion to earn a living and mc comes and destroyed all their hard work. Usually alchemy is a hard profession and people face many failures but mc has no such problems so what happens when in town A you worked hard to make a low grade potions and sell them for 8 copper but you hear a rumor that town B has a godlike potion being sold for the same price, I don't need to spell it out, yes it kind of him to do so, but his kindness is hurting others business and livelihood. 2) Power scale is weird, Idk how mc struggle against the goblin king and ran out of mana I get he is back to being 12 and all and he new to this world but I would imagine having all the mana should amount to some insane strength not to mention his previous knowledge as even the goddess said he'll be stronger than others; and the spider queen being 600 years old she should be a godlike existence maybe not as strong a dragon or other races in the same tier as her but she should definitely wipe out enemies like flies other than her contemporaries
I was enjoying the first 200-300 chapters or so but i really cant read how Fl is just getting walked over by ML and getting sexually assulted and nobody in the comments seems to be bothered by it
