Echoes of Yesterday: A Rebirth Story - Reviews

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The story is interesting.It has a decent storytelling and worldbuilding, recommended for those who like something like dungeon story.However, the reaction of the MC is a bit dull. Maybe the author is not experienced yet, but it become better in the later chapter.Overall, recommended!

My only question is what is the NTR situation? How does it occor. I hate NTR, absolutely hate it. I must know what it means in this story. I’ve seen stories where they have the tag NTR but its only for aide characters, not mc’s girls, just wondering what is it in this cuz if it affevts the mc... im gone.

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Awesome story! I hope to read more of this let's go make it happen, daily updates woooot! what a good read. Following this and recommending it.

It was fine until hMC decided to play an NPC role... That's a trap that'll create a wall too big for the author to overcome and will create a dead end in his story.....

it is good till chapter 12, especially the bond between the brothers.  Need more chaps to get an overall view of this novel. Hope to get 2 chaps a day.?

I like it that MC is fierce and doesn't sit back and let others dictate his life to him. I also like how creative the writer is in regards to the superhero plot. Travis certainly is an interesting character, who I would love to see level up from weak to strong. Okay flow of writing and chapters are understandable, only wish there were more than three chapters. Good job Author-san. A good read that I highly recommend to all WN readers.

i have to say i loved your story at the beginning and i still find it amazing but i couldnt continue past chapter 56. for me jason's attitude towards dani's father is horrible. until that moment in history it is already possible to see that he is in love with her, and even so he does not save her father (which by the way is very strong and could be an incredible support point, even without him knowing that he was part of the guardians).even though jason could have done it differently, i understand his author's line of reasoning, but for me it took away some of my desire to keep reading. Maybe one day I'll come back to read it, I loved your story so far :) (this is all just my point of view, continue with the amazing work author-kun)

Daniel chuckled and kicked a kitchen knife. The serrated blade slid acorss the tile and hit my bare feet.

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