Echoes of Paradise - Reviews

The novel is pretty decent, but I am not sure if the author has given up on it releasing. I need to know if I should just remove it from my library at this rate.

Actually its pretty good, at least i read till 200 chapter and was above average...i mean not the best but idea pretty good... Not that boring and hes only lazy in others think... Hes hiding hes power cuze otherwise he would die.... He read novels so.... ?? Hes careful, but helping hes disclipes everywhere.... And etc, really i enjoyed reading this

You have a great idea for the story! I like the mixture of time travel, reincarnation, and all the science-fiction aspects of your story.The plot is intriguing and your characters are nicely created.The thing that bothers me is the way you construct dialogues, it shows the imperfection of the author's workshop, so there is a place for improvement.

intriguing world building with powerful mc

There wasn't much for Aster to do as Satan, he sat around without any purpose.

"Don't you remember?" asked me more confused. "Remember what desu?" Even Kenji looks more confused.

Zamia's mouth watered the moment she spotted the strawberries. She grabbed a bunch, It's skin sitting smoothly next to hers , a promise of the sweetness within. Yet..

"Being the bad guy," Carter answered.

"Kau tidak ingat dengan kami?" kata pria yang lain. Yoona menggelengkan kepalanya setengah berpikir. "bagaimana dengan luka ini, kau juga tidak mengingatnya?"

Just now....is there another person in here...? No of course not, she's all alone in here. She tried reassuring herself but she really can't stop the rapid pounding of that stupid organ called 'heart' in her chest, she feels like it's going to burst out soon, really.....if it wasn't the source of the blood that keeps her alive she would've ripped it off— nevermind the heart the case here is about the second person inside this house....yeah....person. "Holy.....freaking...." turning around she saw a man in white with a scary mask on his face. "....CHEESE AND HAMBURGERS!!!" she shrieked before running to her room and hiding inside the blanket 'damn that's my favorite food'

Hi!.  My name is Meng Queng  I'm 29 years old an single working for a poor job actually I messed up read carefully OK lets start.

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