Echoes of Forever - Reviews

The emotions that each chapter brings out are so intense. Can’t wait to read how this story develops into a HEA. Karima you talent is amazing ... keep it up ....

1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled(Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!)                                                                                                                                                                                                                             .

one of best novels out therenot boring at all

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Same author that wrote Way of Choices. I love Way of Choices, but I hate the way it's written. If he has written this novel in the same way as Way of Choices. I might actually steer clear of it because it's absolutely infuriating.

good novel, but is it to hard to just check for grammar mistakes, i mean theres not a lot, but from you writing i can tell that it is sloppy mistakes, so please proof read it so that the story flows better. keep up the work :D

I found.this very entertaining, a fun story. so far the story is fairly slow paced but this let's it build its world background and characters. this story is also written fairly well

The author managed to build a very solid world, the scenarios are well described, I was captivated by the author's writing style, the mystery surrounding the ML and how the stiry unfolds as I read more. So far my advice would be to try reducing some paragraphs.

"Wait." Chen Linyun stopped her in her tracks.  His hand had grabbed her left wrist.

When They start rushing me, I look for an opening because you can never underestimate anyone. Yes and that includes the dumb little green guys. I quickly shot 2 of them using 40 mana which causes both of them to die instantly. I swing my sword in a horizontal slash but get pushed my the last guy and get stabbed. I was instantly down to 40 health and bleeding at a fast rate. I slash at him but he dodges. Downed to 30 health. I try to shoot some lighting in a last ditch effort to get him off my back. I accidentally use the last of my mana. I am now downed to 20 health. Am I really going to die like this. I underestimated them and am going to pay for it like this. 10 health. I saw him laughing with spit falling out his mouth. Before I blackout I see an arrow go through the skull of the goblin. Then everything goes black.

Pearl reach out and grabbing Alina's shoulder,then she pushed her. Making her fall into a portal behind Alina and when Alina opened her eyes she was in front of a small pond. She checked her surroundings, seeing a beautiful garden and a small rest area with someone there. The person there had red and blue colored hair with two big, fluffy, ears on his head. Behind the person were also nine, fluffy, red and blue tails, each as large as herself. His eyes changed with every blink but stay blue and red the entire time. His face was that of Samuel, then it hit that person was Samuel. She bolted towards him and tackled him with a bear hug.

Huh, I've struck something good here.