Dyspraxia and His Wealthy Boyfriend [BL] - Reviews

This is going to be an honest review from someone who has read a fair amount of books and novels. To begin with you have a very cliche MC. Typical video game plot and leveling system which isn't necessarily a bad thing. The MC uses about 0% of his brain constantly which leads to lots of plot holes and making the readers angry with his stupid and illogical decisions. The book starts off with ok grammar if you can overlook the misuse of present and past tense as well as constant spelling errors but as it continues the grammar only gets worse. It gets so bad that almost every other sentence looks like a five year old wrote it and it honestly gives me a headache. The plot isn't that bad, its the grammar that needs to be fixed. Please hire someone to fix it.

I thought he would be the only once seeing monster and npc .....goodbye ???????????????????????????????????

Interesting novel and like the way how the characters design m... sad thing author is not updating daily........ Hope u can release more often author kun

am not really into video games novel but damn this is a good one to read. am just a bit dizzy with the compacted paragraphs that looks so scary on my phone but who cares.. i will add this to my novels that I will binge read soon..great job author!

I was initially drawn to this novel by the MC being an archer and not having a harem. The novel exceeded all my expectations and became one of my favorites, who knows the top 1. I loved the development of the story, the characters, the world... I can talk for hours about how much I liked it and I hope that other people also will lucky to enjoy this novel. Author-san, thanks for the work!

Magnler nodded.

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But before she could fall to the ground, she felt strong arms lifting her up to her feet. She couldn't see; the tunic was pressed against her face, yet she knew Brodick had come to her rescue.

"Hello?" I said a few times but the woman only shake her head.

  Setelah menyiram tanamannya, Yoona segera berlari menemui ayahnya yang hendak berangkat ke kantor. Memeluk ayahnya. Sangat lama. Mencium pipi ayahnya berkali-kali. Tidak menghiraukan perkataan ayahnya yang memintanya untuk berhenti.

What's she talking about? She pulls away from me when I say this and holds something to my face. It's the Seven Seasons's magazine that I modelled for! Wow, they released to so quickly. Hmm, on closer inspection, I actually did a good job.

"Jadi kelak?"