Dying by Your Hand - Reviews

I guess it's a fine novel. That remind me a lot Full Metal Panic that I watched years ago when i was still a kiddo. Some kind of comedy/slice of life/misunderstang/romance. Even though, i didn't read a lot (40 chapters) i think i mostly saw everything than can be shown and in the genre that seem quite easy to guess what will happen/will happen not. A good read to relieve you from some boredom.But I will quickly end my read on it for a single big reason. It's premium since chapter 85, they're more than 200+ chapters. That's way too early, i barely got 20-25 gemstone per day (if i don't forget to check). Not adding the fact, it's not some kind of addictive novel, you read it, you can creep a smile time to time but that's all. That's also why the novel is falling in the ranking again and again the more chapters is going on. I can't check if the quality is going down but i don't think so. Think that's simply because it's a premium original with a lot of chapters and the story isn't addictive enough to throw all your wealth into it. They will be some fun joke and funny moments but you can found these moments in others stuffs without having to sacrifice your read on your favorites novels who are more unique.Wishing still good luck to the author, i think that if he's writing that novel just for his own pleasure. That's perfect. If he's writing it to get a living on it, that's going to be a bit more difficult.

This is a trash novel where the MC has OP skills and items but doesn't use them to the fullest until he remembers them at a critical moment then suddenly he becomes a hero. Plus, the author made him so incredibly stupid that logic and critical thinking seem to elude him.

It is slow at the early chapters but because of it, the author succesfully introduced our MC, World and the MC's powers. It has a very interesting concept because even though Zerg (Zergs is a playable race in an RTS game called Starcraft; they basically rely on their fast reproduction,huge numbers and fast evolution and they are also insects) Fanfictions are not rare, you can only find a good one once in a while and this novel I think will slowly steer into that direction. (I hope so)

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I've read both this and My vampire system, there's obviously been... inspiration from the latter but to be honest this just has a better story. I MUCH prefer the characters in this novel, even the MC is better in my opinion and all the other characters just mix so well. When reading Vampire System it feels so unnatural at parts and the characters(including mc) seem so half baked to me, while this novel really improves upon that aspect. The ONLY criticism I can call out is the grammar and such, it's obvious English isn't the authors's first language but still fairly better than most out there and there's a clear improvement the further along the story goes. IDK if the author has dropped this or not but I VERY much hope he continues on this some day, I definitely recommend to read this.

Novel is fine, I'd recommend trying it out. Not a huge fan of the MC, just my opinion......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Some of the few things I have to say of this novel:the idea of the system is pretty darn original, I mean so far I don't think that I've read about this kinda system somewhere else. And coming from a person who reads a lot of novels, it says a lot. Overall, it's a great original idea.Writing quality is great and the flow is smooth. I'm a few chapters in and I'm liking what I read. Out protagonist Diamond is a kind-hearted lady who has been heart by love in the past, not to mention that she was born in a poor (somewhat) family. After an act of kindness, she gains a system. Honestly, after getting rewards, I half expected her to be frugal, due to background, or absolutely batsh't rich. spree. Ngl, she's somewhere in the middle. I love what I read, I'll continue reading it, that's for sure. Keep up the great work, Author!

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James the Janitor is still constantly losing, but Marconi's been set up with a really smart German history teacher named Mr. Wineholt. Mr. Winholt's family lineage traces back to Barons and the Prince of Saxony. He has a relative who's distantly related to Hitler, but he himself has no blood relations. He's supposedly related to Bismarck, but there isn't much evidence left to find.

"Plus, she has never tried to misbehave with me."

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Instead, he played ignorant of his surroundings. This all meant the prince wanted to be ridiculed. "Listen, Duan Yun. Father is already kind. Everything he says is for yours and the kingdom's benefit. However, your actions of repeatedly denying him is a spit in the face. Yet, my father does not bring this matter up. In fact, out of courtesy for the late Emperor's compassion and fairness, my father has never paid kindness with viciousness."