duty revenge - Reviews

can't wait to read more!!

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?............ ? great..................

Any novel similar to top-tier providence deserves a thumbs up to me. The mc is probably not as much of an extremist as Han Jue, as he finds it ok for disciples to go down the mountain to the outside world if need be. This is unlike Han Jue who basically tells his disciples whose clan is about to be killed to stay put and not go out.The pace isn't too bad, it's more on the faster side, mostly because the mc is getting a bit too pampered by the system by gaining all the knowledge regarding arrays, a cauldron that can refine any pill with the highest quality without fail, and spring water that can accelerate growth of spiritual plants by a hundred years. Well it's not like I find it bad or anything.The characters are a-ok, the mc does stick to his values and his disciples feel much more naturally placed than last week's trial read that also makes use of a "taking in disciples system". It's because the 2nd disciple doesn't just instantly beat the 1st disciple mc got because of a different in quality, so it doesn't feel like the past disciples will be expendable and left behind.World background is alright, can't really comment about it on a 20chapter novel really

A very well thought out and beautiful design. Looks like a lot of time and effort when into this. Over all not finishes but so far an amazing read.

Pretty good all around if you're looking for something  with game elements this is one of the good ones that I've seen so far. Can't quite remember the name but it reminds me of close combat mage.

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As they had not moved from their original spot, the ship was merely minutes away from Arlong Park.

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I entered the school went to my class and sit down at last bench alone. While other students were sitting on front with their friends. Teacher came in class and everyone said Good morning, everyone except me cause I never felt that something were good about that morning. Mam said are you ready for your test? All student said yes mam but I knew I wasn't ready. Mam started to give question paper to everyone and i looked at my question paper and it was saying to me "Just Give Up, You Can't Do It , You Are Weaker Then Other". I looked at other students question paper and on their paper it was written "You Are Better Than Him , You Can Do It". And I felt even weaker and lonely than before .