Dropped! - Reviews

We need more..., Truly, this is a hidden gold. MC is a genius, he also focus on the right path, always try to gain benefits out of any situation. Just hope that if there's a girl that truly love him, he won't use her in his scheme. That's all i hope for now, thanks for the hard work and don't forget to punish the princess lol

Hi, author is here!
I promise you a intelligent, genius MC. A lot of schemes and merciless killing. There will be R-18 scenes, but not a lot. I will build the World background as the story goes forward.

Also, I'm still a beginner. Thus, mistakes are unavoidable sometimes. Bear with me;)

Edit: The editing of the previous chapters has began. Big thumbs up to my editor.

I hope I won't end up reading about saving the world crap or save some female *****.
And I also hope he doesn't get too much attachment to his harem

Not gonna lie, seeing the score i had high expectations, but sadly i got disappointed. I don't want to be too hard on the author, i know that it's very difficult for him writing in another language, but this novel needs an honest review.

Writing quality(2/5): overall the writing quality is barely passable, it's not so bad that it's unreadable, but it's like reading a middle schooler essay... Lots of grammatical errors (missing puntuaction; swapping pronouns) and strange syntax order.

Stability(5/5): nothing to say here

Story development(3/5): not really a unique plot, but overall ok

Character design(2/5): the MC is described as cunning and scheming but in reality he is not that smart. He do really stupid things that attract unwanted attention on himself even if he keep saying that he don't want to be noticed (like when he random kills 700 people in the ammission test getting the attention of all the powerful families, or when he reveals his name when supposed to be dead, and many more...)

World background(2/5): the background until now is non existent.

MC is smart, atleast in the first few chps...his moments of intelligence was shown, that was dope,,ex: he secretly took over his clan despite being weak....[really hope moments like that continue. show moments of MC using brain,,,would be nice].

..he is not stupid, he is ruthless, but not retarded....so yah, thats nice. Hope u dont make MC a show off idiot, [ show in right moments, i suppose]....add some romance, but dont make his lovers useless bitches that love him for his strength or looks, IDK,,make em help and protect MC and ****, u know, and not abandon him for clans and ****.

**: MC should kill the princess

So heres my review. I think that this book is great and has a lot of potential. The writer is new and I do feel that the chapters are a bit small but that can improve with time.
Now the mc is interesting and seems smart which is all I ask for in a novel nowdays so this is a plus. The other characters so far are okay but can get better with more descriptions and a bit of development.
This story is good but it can be great if its fleshed out more.
Its just that it is bit too fast paced for my liking and I would liked it if the beginning of the novel was slower paced. If it was done slowly, this novel would be as good as reverend insanity.
All in all, this is good book with a lot of potential and I hope for its success.

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This is what I would call a great concept that was poorly executed. The idea of the story is great, the summary accurately portrays the idea thus drawing you in. But once reading it the interest quickly dies out. The Grammer is bad, no other way to put it. The character development is shallow next to non existent. Its rushed, no real connection formed between the reader and MC. Its more of a story u read to fulfill ur power trip fantasies. Reading it expecting anything else will disappoint u.

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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