Dreams Above the City - Reviews

For prospective readers: personal recommendation is find something else.Why?Principally, lack of character development. Sunny's most frequent self-descriptions remain words like "panicked". After 400+ chapters, very little of substance has changed - only numbers on character sheet.Suspect author is trying to maximize word-count, as with almost every fiction on this site. This comes through in the writing, and the pace of the plot. Recommend going to RoyalRoad. Quality of Rank 100 on that site > quality of this story, going by satisfaction per time spent reading. Finally, author only responds to positive feedback. I.e., acts as an author completely insulated to criticism. This almost guarantees that flaws in story will continue to be unresolved for the next several hundred chapters.

at first, his mother and father, and sister thought he was dead in one of the chapters, but when he came back, his back as a god name nott and let see what'll happened. PS for author:I'm vary curious how they react of that he is "dead" i hope you can at least tell us in the near future,and all of them are 5 stars except for world background it is 4 stars.

This book may be better than others in this batch but the original was dropped by the author halfway through. The same thing happened to the other book written by the author

I first thought that the system is quite annoying because it keeps giving him annoying missions but if you read chapter 80, it'll make you know that plot is not that simple. The system is actually trying to help the MC. Then after chapter 80+, it even gets better as time goes on. One of my favorite novels.Also if you have any novel suggestions that is as good or even better please write it.?

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This has definitely become one of my favourite novels to read after becoming tired of most of the novels these days. The grammar is not the best, but it is definitely readable and the story is worth it. If you find factory stuff satisfying and you like to see soldiers in a cultivation world with guns, try this novel out. It isn't rushed and you will see the impact of our modern ideologies in another world.A tip I would give after reading up to chapter 25 would be to view capital letters as the start of new sentences. Also, sometimes lists are missing commas. Other than that, read with imagination and creativity. There is no romance or weird behaviour so far, it's pure content.Would recommend.

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The concept is fantastic! Although I have only read few chapters of your book, I was drawn inside that world! The only few points that I'd like to point out is the usage of tenses (since you started with past tense, I think you should use past participle words.) and filter words. Besides that, I think this novel is going to be fantastic!

"Miss Bella wants to see you." Ian said with excitement.

" Papa udah nyiapin kamar buat abang..isinya lengkap loh."

Saying this with narrowed eyes,he looked at the location where Madam Winter was previously, noting that she had completely vanished with no clues, he then went to bring the disciple out his mind trap, all the time trying to forget the brief moment of fear he'd experienced as the wave him, his fear of death so powerful he'd involuntarily shook for a bit.

"just a pup?" she was shocked "but you look like yoire 25 at best"