Dread King's Bride - Reviews

- Review as of 20 chapters in:This is a transmigration system novel in a cultivation world that is ruled by sects. Our mc Is transmigrated into a 14 year old boy called Kai, who is a slave with nothing to his name and gets a system. Now unlike most systems I dont find it to be too op or broken yet, Which personally I like. Makes the mc seem more vulnerable, relatable and allows for growth. What does his system do you may ask? Read it and find out.•Writing Quality•Author has the occasional grammatical errors, however as an avid reader I read very quickly and build an idea of what is going on in my head therefore Isn’t noticable for me.The way author lays out system status is very nice and easy to read.•Story development•Unlike most sect creation novels, mc doesn’t (or has yet to) produce anything out of thin air such as a sect building. This gives the novel a nicer, slower pace than other sect building novels.This seems like a novel where we will see the mc work his way up step by step and toil away to build his sect. I say this because the Author might have foreshadowed mc becoming an alchemist in order to secure funds to operate his sect. Furthermore, bare in mind mc is only 14 years old. I imagine most sect leaders are much older than this and therefore may be quite a while before we see any actual sect development. However there are already signs of the mc’s first disciples, which is a good start.•World background•Author does a good job of slowly introducing the background world and not info dumping everything all at once. It also helps that mc knows almost nothing as well so as he learns we learn with him.All in all this looks like a novel with a lot of potential and was something I enjoyed reading. I wish that there were more chapters, so thanks author looking forwad to see what happens next ??✨

Interesting system novel I've never really seen before. Unique concept, great characters (though not really my type of MC lol) and awesome writing quality.Keep it up, author!

lol now this is a novel worth reading..please pick this novel..everything about it is just amazing..an MC with an OP system that doesn't over turn the world system and has a normal vibe to it..the martial arts are just too funny??

The plot development iS good one. I hope the author is able top continue this work and provide a unique arc to the story. can't wait to read more./

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Thinking of all the manga, anime, and novels I read in my past life I managed to think up a few uses for my Void Void Fruit. The void is a concept of nothingness and even the emptiness of space is called The Void. As it is a space time fruit I began to think of some uses from anime. The very first thing I made was an Item Box. I created a separate space with my devil fruit that I can put items in or out of. I'm not really sure how big that space is though. Second I worked on making my Void Void power give me a logia type ability which I thought of from Obito's Kamui. I can make my body become 'nothing'. Making it exist and not exist at the same time thus allowing me to phase through objects. Though unlike Mirio Togata I don't start sinking through the floor.

"Hey dragon, can't you just wait until another day to figure out what ever you are talking about?" I asked.

Shirou's countenance darkened as he maneuvered in the air.

Back in his cabin Bradlin closed the door and leaned against it . It had taken his whole will power to walk away from her . Through out the meeting as the directors presented their files his eyes had never left her . As she sat there silently trying to blend in with the crowd he felt like a part of his mind was itching to go and comfort her . When her manager had asked her to pass his file she was still in denial and had not responded , the manager had brushed her hand and snatched his file . Watching this a demon rise in him as he saw the lust filled gaze that he gave Sandra .

MP: 100/100