hey a few thing i would like in the story. Just know im not telling how to write your book this is just my wants.1.i don't see a need for romance I think I just doesn't fit the feel the story has.2.i like the way your writing the book it has a show don't tell kinda thing going on.
Leaving a review, please don't mind me. I know nothing about this novel at all. Please enjoy your reading experience ..............................................................................
Anyone else read th titles for chapter 60 and on thinking it sound like song or is it Just me.__....._______............_.________________.__...............................
It´s an interesting and fun story that catches the reader off guard. I enjoyed the twists and turns the arc offers. Just when you think you know what might happen next, the author tends to surprise you with vivid details that keep you wanting more.
The novel is still at its early stages, but I enjoy already the flow of the story. It maybe because it has a slow pace plot the reason that I enjoyed it, but I really like novels that has battles and strategies in place.
I don't know how to appreciate this one. The story is good, and the concept is amazing. The downside is that it is too dark, but sadly, things like this are happening in real life somewhere in the world.
i have been reading this for a while, the world is amazing, i can't wait to see what's up there in Emperium.slow pace but it is fine because the updates are great
I looovve this bookReading it makes me remember a plethora of fantasy books I've read. The intrigue???Who knows... This author might be the next Rick Riordan, Cassandra Clare or even Sarah J Maas
Seems decent enough. Drop a 100 chapters. Seriously keep it up brother, if this had a 100 chapters more I believe that it would be one of the better stories on this app.
