Dragon's Dawn: First Light(Book 1: REVISED) - Reviews

its good more chapters please more chapters pleasemore chapters pleasemore chapters pleasemore chapters pleasemore chapters pleasemore chapters please

whoever translated this novel did a terrible job. i could not make heal or tail of most of the sentences. a lot of issues with gender pronouns.

xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp

Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

keep it up :)good storyhehehe???????????--------------------------------------------------（╯°□°）╯︵( .o.)----------------------------------------------┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ︵ ┻━┻----------------------------------------------

giving 1 star is going favor cause can't do any lower, from 1st chapter it is paid, worst , ?

Interesting story. It hooked me from the start. Ashton is quite a character. At first I thought he was overly shameless but later he was just a crazy friend to little Matt. The story flows wonderfully also l liked the introduction to Terminus. The awakening was also portrayed nicely keep it up.

Also, tell us about the Lechys survivors if there are any apart from the ones at the dungeon too."

Immediately, four maids, including Ling Feiji, hurried in. They all bowed low, and one asked, "how may we serve you today, your majesty?"

Even though she's supposed to be 'emotionless', for some reason Shuhang felt as if Ophis is pouting at the mention of Great Red's name. Cute. Uh... That's not important right now! There is a more pressing issue at hand here...

- "Today is the day! Today history will be made! And people will remember my name!" - he exclaimed as he ventured inside.

I was stuck at the peak Body Tempering realm for a very long time and could not breakthrough due to the lack of a proper dantian. However my knowledge in the fields of Alchemy, smithing, summoning and beast taming were far above those of my peers even on par with the Upper Level Elders of my Tang Family. So my position as the Young Master was never questioned upon and I was revered by the other disciples. However only I knew that no matter how good I am at all these things, if I couldn't become an Immortal my rebirth will have been in vain. One day while meditating, I finally heard from the ImmEvo System again.