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If this is good then hope it's picked as hasn't been a good kingdom building novel picked in ages. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxxxxxxxxxxpppppppppppp
I couldn’t bear it. I forced myself to read as far as possible because of the author and other reviews’ assurance that everything would be everything would be explained around ch 80 but i could barely make it to ch 43. I just hate janus (the system) with a passion. I liked most of everything else (the only female interaction that i liked was the stab victim and ive only seen her once so far). And the male characters also dont seem to be treated well. But the concept seemed extremely interesting and i was curious to see what the true story behind what happened was. I really really wanted to reach the part where everyone says it gets good but I practically had to force most the chapters down. If i have to struggle through 80 chapters just to get to the good part then i cant say this is a particularly attractive novel.So i have to drop it. Maybe someone with more perseverance and willpower will make it through and reach the goal, that person might actually find a really good story at the end of that road. Unluckily that wont be me.
'Boy love' is all I need to know about your story. To me, BL(sh*t) = disgusting garbage, potential suicide material. You are not right in the head writing and reading this.
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It has a cool premise, but the writing is not very good. The story also struggles to make the characters feel alive instead it feels like a story idea written by an AI.
"Hey, look at this, guys!" She yelled, which was unnecessary. She turned towards the others and exclaimed, "Another classmate! The more, the merrier, right?" She averted her attentions towards Gina again, hands on hips. "Hi, the name's Akane. Miyamoto, Akane. And you are?" She inquired with an expression of curiosity.
