Dragon Ball Ultra Plus - Reviews

Greetings, my fellow cultured ladies and gentlemen. If you have read this book in the past but then dropped it for whatever reason, this review is for you. Minor spoilers ahead! Beware.After taking feedback from readers and editors alike, I have went back and edited a lot of the previous storyline (e.g. bringing the huntress along, MC making 'mistakes' despite his years of experience) to make it more realistic and fitting of the MC's character. I sincerely recommend giving this book another try, as I have fixed many of the previous inconsistencies.Thank you to everyone who does give this book another shot, and I hope you all have an awesome day. :)

Tem muito potencial no mundo, eu recomendaria que depois que acabar ou chegar longe na historia dar uma revisada e ver o quando você melhorou na escrita, porque esse mundo tem muito a ser explorado.

"Died?" Don said to no one as his mind wondered. 'If I hadn't...then..."

*thump*

First of all, he needed someone willing to marry them which would no doubt be an arduous task.

"The bottom line was: You broke Nina's heart. And that's the reason why I hate you."

Then suddenly he heard birds chirping in the distance….his vision slowly came back, it was blinding at first but it started to clear up.

"This is some party Chris!"

The Jester is an devil, he created by Dark as his servant, who has a striking appearance like a clown with his smiley face.

Mandatory 5-star self-review. I'm confident in the quality of my writing and guarantee you its consistency throughout the book.If you like grim worlds with a dark fantasy feel, unfathomable Lovecraftian horrors, and the threat of madness at every corner, this is the story for you. As I have noted, the beginning will be slow but not uninteresting. The protagonist is highly intelligent, manipulative, and cunning but not overly ruthless nor a murder hobo. His first taste of power will come relatively late, but it will be sweet, and worth it after all the hurdles he will have faced.If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. Also, don't forget to vote and leave a review. It greatly motivates me to continue writing!