Draconic Ascension: Book of Reality and Spirits - Reviews

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honestly pretty good so far, the writing and grammer is excellent. I'll keep reading cause it's got an interesting plot. it is going to be interesting how you balance real life/game time because people need to work and eat. if you go offline for a few hours then days will go by

Soap in a cultivation world? ?That’s outright ridiculous. These beings possess spiritual energy that allows them to cleanse their bodies in seconds. Why would anyone waste time or resources on something as mundane as soap? It completely undermines the essence of a cultivation world where the focus is on transcending the mortal plane and mastering energy beyond the physical.Hospitals and schools in a cultivation world? Even more absurd. True cultivators don't fall ill—spiritual energy fortifies their bodies and purges any impurities or diseases. Hospitals and doctors would be irrelevant unless we're talking about a mortal or very low-level world. As for schools, most cultivation worlds feature sects, clans, or academies where knowledge is passed down through strict mentorship, ancient manuals, or inheritances. The idea of modern-style schools in a high-fantasy cultivation world is just lazy world-building.And if there are no sects, clans, or academies in this so-called "cultivation world," then what even is it? Cultivation worlds thrive on power struggles, legacy conflicts, and the rivalry between factions like sects, prestigious clans, or imperial academies. Without these, the story loses its foundation.  The only way this premise could make sense is if the protagonist transmigrated to a trash, barbarian-like world still stuck in a tribal era. Even ordinary mortal worlds in a decent cultivation setting would have basic things like healers, herbal remedies, and schools for basic literacy. For a cultivation world to lack even the fundamentals is just nonsensical. At this point, calling it "trash" would be generous.  World-building is the backbone of cultivation stories, and this synopsis seems to have failed miserably.?️????

Shameless 5 stars review from me, I only read the first chapter and it feels too rush. Take it slow, explain the world building first and watch out for diction (ex: height 175 cm, not tall 175 cm) also the grammar or the structure of your sentence, maybe you need an editor. .Tetap semangat dan keep improving yourself to be a better writer.Podho wong Indo-ne tak dukung tok pokok?

A really trashy novel, dont bother reading it. So little is explained of the MC, his System, or the world in general. The whole thing reads like the author is just spewing out random plot and the readers are supposed to just know what he was thinking at the time. It's atrocious. In regards to the MC, he comes across as an actual MMO character. As in, someone logged into a random MMO then without care for the story, plot, or quests, just ran about killing things and showing off like they're a boss.

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Very Interesting, this story makes readers can imagine quite well. Continue your work, I'll still be waiting for the continuation of this story.Characters inside this story are quite strong

I won't comment on the grammar and spelling mistakes, since many have already spoken about it. It's amazing how someone can take a good idea for a very good plot and turn it into such a horrible novel. The romance for the MC and the Female Lead is as dumb as possible. He tries to make it an epic romance, but fails terribly. Either they are apart because the FL is a dumb b*tch, or the are together with the FL whining and complaining about the MC. And the poor bastard just takes it, over and over again.  This whole idea is so plain stupid that the MC nearly sacrifices his life for the FL so many times, and the times he needs help she is never around because she needs to be stronger for the MC. What is the point of that if she is never around when he needs it?! On the other hand we have another love interest that practically killed herself to save the MC, that stands by him, supports him, understands him, but NO!! The FL has to be the romance for the MC. It gets so annoying that I find myself wishing the stupid spoiled FL to just die. I honestly think the author must have had a really screwed up relation in his past to think of love as he does. Whatever that is, it's not love, neither here nor in hell!!The characters generally are well written, meaning the are not 2 dimension characters. they have their own backgrounds, reasons, hopes, etc. The issue here is that the author spends as much time writing about the side characters as he spends on the MC. And he keeps on jumping perspectives. One moment we are following the MC doing something important, and then we are watching some non important character doing a monologue about how beautiful the sky is. The time jumping also is a bit too much. Time travelling is supposed to be either impossible or prohibited by the higher powers, but every few chapters we find another time traveler, or someone with memories about the future. The really good parts about this novel is when we are following the MC. He is a decently written character, besides his stupidity in romance and the main love interest. But regarding his "cultivation" an advancement the chapters are pretty interesting. And the challenges he faces are well done as well. Besides correcting the grammar and spelling (FIND AN EDITOR!!) and slowing down the changes of perspectives, all the author would need is a realistic romance or no romance at all and the story would improve drastically...

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he continues..."no matter what life would bring....you will be the blossoms in my heart...."

The crime section of Hero Epics continued. His grandfather continued to watch without a word. Whenever their Rising Stars segment started, his grandfather would look at him disappointingly. But he always returned a steadfast gaze, causing his grandfather to sigh.