Downfall Of The Kings - Reviews

Hola, Its the Author.

I genuinely didnt know I could write a review for my own book...

Mwahahahaha.

Anyway enjoy my shameless review.

Downfall Of The Kings is a fantastic book. It plays with a lot of ideas and topics that have already been established within the fantasy community. While the book is certainly inspired by many of these, I can assure you, its defenitly unique in its own right.

Prepare for a lot of twists, turns and snarky stupidity. Honestly would You expect anything less? The main character is modeled after me you know.

The writing at the beginning is very rough so bear with me please. I think the quality seems to be getting better... I dont really know but its a lot easier to write now.

[Insert Awkward Laugh Here]

Anyway Im sure I have bored you by now with this Review. Go out There and read my book!!!!!!!!

Please...

Sorry for the exclamation points, I didn’t mean to yell at you, I was just excited.

Thank you for all your continued support!!!!

REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
Now, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work!
ADVICE
None, the author was a better writer compared to me! Haha.

Well done. I have read a few stories that are inspired by games structures but this is the first that has a well-thought plot with a flow and suspense without relying too much on game characteristics. Keep writing and best of luck

I usually dislike novels where they do a needlessly long piece of why so and so is re-incarnating, going back in time or some such.

However, this is the correct way of beginning with the past, all the relevant content, betrayal and in a single chapter. For one, this story is made of my favorite tropes, so I could only like it... that said, the writing definitely picks up from second chapter, and it's easy to read and entertaining.

One could almost see what's happening in the minds-eye.

Well done. I think I found a keeper... How about you?

My Beloved readers.

From the bottom of my heart I apologize for this message but I am no longer going to keep updating my book.

It is a bittersweet decision but one that I must make. Between working three jobs, heavy criticism, lack of motivatIon and trying to find sleep, I Have no time to write or update the book.

I am so sorry To any one who actually liked the story.

SPOILER ALERT


To give closure to like that one fan of my book I will share with you what I had planned.


Em and Ventus would reunite and defend against the mini War force trying to attack sulpa

With all 5 of Quinn’s Disciples dead, the constraints on her true and most powerful follower. He was going to wreck everyone as He was madly in love with quinn and would take everyone out in her name. Through the combined efforts of Lakia, Phinn, Sam, Em, Ven, and SB they would overcome and move to fight Quinn.

She tried to wreck them but they whoop her And Em deals the final blow.

[Insert Story]

Fate dies some how…Had not spent much Time since she was my least fav.

Xavier comes in just to stomp on everyone,

Phinn is mad because Xavier is abusing his daughter.

He gets killed by Xavier but not before entrusting her to Em.

Em gets a power boost and all his old abilities back when he gets his soul back.

Our heros move to 99th floor determined to kill the final king.

They get wrecked.

SB sacrifices himself to Save Em and Ven by transcending into the Great Slime God Sir Blob.

Round 2 with xavier happens and they overcome him.

In a dark twist, the great evil manifests and defeats the Master Of Shadows, opening up the door straight to floor 100.

Em and Ven go
Only to realize that the final ones to kill are this great Evil Who not only took over the body of the forgotten champion but also corrupted Autumn.

After an epic fight everyone dies leaving Em alone and with a choice. He can go home to earth and Leave behind everything he fought against and Betray the memories of those who entrusted salvation to him or he can pick up the Mantel of the great evil and start the cycle again just as he had done so in order for a better outcome.

(He was the evil all along whaaaaaaaat)

Anyway lame story sorry to have made you read it.

I'm so speechless only 35 reviews and 257 viewers...wow I'm so jealous now. I wish I could also write such a stupendously fantabolous work...I'm amazed and so so jealous please give me some of your brain hehe. I'm Amazed Kudos ☺️☺️

I am not sure if I am even qualified to review because the author here is really really good. I just started by reading a few chapters to give it a go and the whole time it got me craving for more. I will be back to read from the first again when I start my break. This deserves an undivided focus to read. At least I believe so ^^

I always look at author's note first. When the author asked on his author note, Are you ready? I did not know what I should be ready for. and now, I know what he was warning me about. the author is seriously way beyond a master narrator's skills. The unbridled rage and jealousy I feel is just eating my heart's out! Now, I just feel really  inferior to the way the author narrates. truly, this is a beautiful beautiful book, that I just really love to hate. and one more thing, about the villains, how dare you make me understand the motivations behind the villain's actions. nooooo! I clearly am not ready for this book! Now I hate asking you for review, but I seriously, Seriously, admire you!

This novel was so lit that I got chills! So freakin good and so awesome! More power to the writer's works and More inspiration to the creativity and imagination. All in all, a good read! Kudos and Peace ✌️

One of the best novels I have read on the site so far. Also one of the only novels with the comedy tag that actually made me giggle. I love every word I have read so far, and the witty dialogue is incredibly fun. I would die for Sir Blob, don't kill or leave him or I will drop instantly. Not really though it's too good so far. Time to play with slime.

This is my first story to review on this site, but I have reviewed a decent number of stories on other sites. Still I wanted to keep my expectations in check. But, boy, am I blown away. This is one of the best System stories that I have read. The author even goes and creates the tables, even though WN itself is not very conducive as a platform to create those tables.
1. Writing Quality: This is definitely the strongest suit. Author's writing is professional level. Vocabulary, grammar all refined and congruent to the story. No unnecessary use of overly flowery words that impede the progression of the story.
2. Stability of Updates: I see that the author updates regularly
4. Story Development: A steady progression. The pacing is great, not too slow but doesn't feel rushed. The author takes times with fleshing out scenes and characters which is great.
4. Character Design: Speaking of which, very clear, contrasting characters that won't bore you. Clear motivations.
5. World Background: Professionally done. You are immediately immersed into the world and never leave.
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Amazingly well done!
I honestly reccomend this to people wanting to find a good read.
Great work author!
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