Douluo Dalu: Blue Silver Fairy - Reviews

I read 80 chapters and I can say this novel has a lot room for improvement. For beginning... Let's start with MC, he spent 400 years in hell... I guess it killed most of his brain cells. Zero research about 'hunter' actions before becoming one. If not plot armor, his stupidity would kill his family. Writing quality needs some editing. Some typpos here and there. Some sentences are quiete broken. WQ - 3 stars. You should consider editing your story before putting it before pay wall. None likes paying for being proof reader...SU - 4 stars. Story dev. - 3 stars. It's okay... Ruthless protagonist trying to improve his family situation and acts like wuxia protagonist killing random guy son. Blah blah blah. It could be avoided with some brains.Character design - 2 stars. It's probably weakest side of this story. Most of characters are cliché or bland. World background - 4 stars. Currently it feels like default Korean novel.This rating might improve if you make things better later in story. This review is based on free chapters. Maybe, you started to put more effort after getting contracted. I will visit later... No money for spirit stones and run out of passes. I hope this story improves. Good luck.

This is a pretty bland story where all he needs is Spirit stones and he'll learn everything. It's not very good as a series tbh and it's not that good to read due to its monotonous tone.

Apex, did you drop this novel? it seems there hasn't been an update for a month now.

Review 1 - 5/12/19I am writing this review to bolster my confidence, and to increase the number of ratings on my fiction. It is also a way to record my progression as a writer.

Read only until chapter 6... From what i could see this is a novel based on forced ridicule situations just to create tired old slapstick comedy... As for the scientific part, good luck if one can find it.

A very well written action-based book with plenty of blood. Right up my alley! I can see this book taking an increasingly dark turn and look forward to it, as the author is very good at describing such scenes!Without spoiling anything, certain parts of this book had me reading at the edge of my seat. So give this book a try!

This is a intense novel to read. The villain thinks of some unique ways yyo kill off the characters. But the question is who is the killer and who will die next!!!

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Super good novel. I was a fan of authors previous work and can say with complete certainty that this novel is better. I'm glad to see the author's improvements, you can tell it's more thought out and the pacing is quite a bit better. It's still a bit early, but based from what I've seen so far I'm expecting great things and very much look forward to what adventures may await us.

"I'm from the Sun village and I request some food!"

"Little boy are you going to get off me?" A woman's voice sounds and I look up a little more. Speak of the devil I found Kurenai. Male Moe mode activate! "I-i'm sorry big sister" I say as i push myself away from her only I do make sure to note her perfect 'assets' with my eidetic memory, thank you previous soul! I get up making sure to show just a few tears at the corner of my eyes. "Owie!" I whimper reaching down I rub my ankle which is sore now. 'Yes good going universe!'

"Then why the hell did two appear?" Belerus cursed while looking at me with suspicion.