Dominance of Veiled Hearts - Reviews

Great storyline... fantastic read

Idk if this guy is translating or copy and pasting what is already translated from asada translations but the first 100 chapters are already translated there. This story is my favorite novels and I normally can't stand vr stuff, but anyway, this novel deserves a 4.5 or so but since this guy didnt give credit or say if he was translating it or not I'm giving it a 3. It's great and I would definitely read it if you like protagonists that arent stupid and dont care about common sense. I would also read it from asada translations cause it has more translated currently. The story's title is "Reader" on NU and asada translations.

The general premise is similar to Digging to Survive, however it is executed in a way that is much better. The plot, characters and game mechanics are far more interesting and even though the mechanism by which he got his cheat was just that he was ranked first in a game he played this is already much better and easier to accept than simply being given it out of nowhere. There are also more interesting characters and there seems to actually be pressure on our MC to improve as opposed to the other novel where he seems to has no purpose. The system and world building are quite good and seems far more logical. The author also seems to have left plenty of room for development into kingdom building and MMO rpg style growth. I look forward to reading more

Hey man update more chaptersI like your fanfic I would appreciate if you continue to update your fanfic regularlythanks for your workawesome

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I can only say, it's good, worth giving a try... Well, the number of chapters is not very much that's the only downfall. Love it hope you update daily.

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I really enjoyed the first chapter its kind of new style to the other i have read before keep up the good work i hope you don't stop with your work cause i kind of want to know what will happen in the next chapter

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- At least we know that everyone around Daniel is Human. I would find it hard to imagine what a Caucasian/Asian/African Elf/Dwarf/Undead would look like.

"I'll join the team, but you have to promise me you'll tell me everything about my grandpa." She intensively stared at Minsoo. Jae Eun kept the marriage part to herself, she thought if she didn't mention it then he'd eventually forget.

Riding unique - A+