I thoroughly enjoyed this, I hope you release more soon. The world building is very fascinating. The characters have depth, even if I've only read five chapters.
This is a really captivating volume, and with more work it could really stand out.
I feel the pacing should be adjusted, some scenes feel rushed, and also adjust the clarity for more flow.
Ok, the story is well-thought and interesting. I have just got some few questions here and there but all In it's a really gripping story.
For some reason I can't leave the comment until I've written 140 words.
By the way I am not even done with the book yet
