DIVINE STAR - Reviews

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Having read halfway through 60 chapters of this novel, I would like to say that it is really an interesting one... However, the author's way of writing it is making the story line way too predictable. I would expect to see harem happening soon. By the way, good job to the translator for changing the way of translation and saved my eyes from the enormous amount of 'young lad's used.

The story has a good plot and decent development. Though there are a few time skips it doesn’t give you everything at once which overloads the reader. The writing style is also pretty good. The author is kind enough to take suggestions from the readers which is an added bonus. The only issue would be the occasional grammar mistakes. Considering how often they update ad that they do it on their own plus the length of the chapters I’m surprised it’s minor things like plurals ever now and then which shows the author is good at writing.

Around chapter 280 I've liked the characters, since not just the mc are well developed, but now in not sure it's worth reading anymore, recent developments make me doubt this is worth spending any more on and make me feel it was just a waste of time between several characters blatantly ignoring what's in front out them for no apparent reason and the recent change in the direction of the story I'm mostly just feeling annoyed and not really enjoying it any more...

Best story I've ever read on this app. An actual realistic ish main character, who doesn't through the magic of a system turn into michael jordan in his rookie year. The main character, Hector actually fails and learns which is refreshing.

very good book I would definitely read it if I were you ???

I must admit you're doing great godly cat keep it up

great novel overall, really excellent at developing the various characters. If I have a gripe it's that it is to slow which is inherently a bad thing but I'm skirting the line between interested and bored. With the constant slow pace I can't bring myself to use anymore points on unlocking chapters. I don't mind it being slow for a few chapters but a lot of the stuff covered in the slow chapters has been covered repeatedly. I'm often paying to read the same content just in a new setting ie now instead of him thinking about it while sitting on a horse he is explaining it to someone.. which makes sense logically but for a reader it's redundant information. Not saying that it needs more action just needs more things than it's currently giving me.

As she admired the way the silver wound around the stone and connected to the chain that hung around Niklas' neck, the man himself watched with curiosity as the child played.

"uzumaki naruto "

Vit: 10 (every level will provide 10 Vitality...Unable to put points here) (Perks activate at level 2)