Divine Son Reincarnated With A Domination System - Reviews

Overall, a novel with good ideas but poor character design. After being framed and sentenced to death for murder, the MC- a violent gang boss- traveled to a parallel world to become part of a police investigation team. He is randomly tied to a system, but when catching criminals, he relies on forced plot development (instead of using brains). I do not like the MC's personality (brash and rude like a gangster); in fact, the original police officer (whose body MC transmigrated into) seemed to have a much better personality compared  to MC. I was looking forward to this since we don't have good Chinese detective webnovels (most are Japanese like "Shinrei Tantei Yakumo"), but I was disappointed (my rating was already +1 for having the game system, but character development turned out to be too poor).

This novel is one of those where the MC gets a system not to power-up themselves but to run a business. I personally really like this kind of novels, so it's interesting to read.So far there are only 4 chapters so I guess the shop would become more and more popular overtime.A few suggestions I wanted to give based on my personal opinion (author you can ignore these if you want since they are just my opinions)Do a bit more world building, there are certain things I was able to imagine on my own but also things that I couldn't create a mental image of. One such thing is the shop: there is a transformation but the reader doesn't get to know much about how it looks now compared to before. I'd recommend checking out Black Tech Internet Cafe or some other similar novels to get inspiration on how to describe the changes.From the general writing perspective I'd suggest avoiding repetitive use of words such as realized and shabby, and look for some synonyms.The plot is a bit fast but I don't mind that too much.Overall it's a very nice novel. I hope Lin Fan's sister isn't crazy and the shop grows well. Keep working hard!

the synopsis was pretty captivating and for those who love fantasy would have been a massive draw. the author is a good writer and knows how to flow well with words but reading the first few chapters I didn't exactly find what I was expecting...still trying to figure out how the first few chapters connect though(will probably find that out in the later chapters).the grammar was spot on and the author no doubt is a skilled writer.

Give this one a chance! If you can overlook the grammatical and spelling errors, there's a fast paced, action packed storyline here and the character design is incredible! I fell in love with the characters by the end of the first chapter. Keep up the good work author!

"At least this time you found a name to add onto the title. You really like saying nonsensical stuff."

Most of the kids were terrify and moved towards the walls. The two big man came inside the room and looked at the mess.

is this going to be a harem?(hope so) if so I hope he gets all the girls of the original harem(excluding Issie's childhood friend unless in this Issie is a girl) and add Grayfia(steal her), Gabriel(s.e.x.y sweet n.a.i.v.e angel), Yasaka(foxy milf) and Ophis the loli dragon please

" any... thing"

She said in a shocked tone as each girl is taking their uniforms of piece by piece until their luxurious smooth body frames could be seen as they weren't wearing any lingerie, but they were wearing garter belts as there were 4 wired mini vibrators inside their pussies, asses and two wireless mini vibrators on their nipples with all of them breathing lewdly in almost perfect unison

"So they're people like you? All those famous people?"she saw the man nodded slightly.

But by surprise of them, in the night when they finished making love, a small ray of light descended on his house, crossing the roof until it was on the belly of Minerva.

Lifespan: Immortal