Disventure Camp Chat shenanigans - Reviews

I find this beginning very interesting hopefully this continues to see where this goes

amazing bro. .it's good you should try to publish it more you know.... . . ... . .. . .... .... .. ..... . ........ . .. ....... m. . .... ...

Welcome to this story. Now, a few things first before we dive in. (Ignore the rating. I'm the author so I think I get a free pass? I'll update this note once I'm deep enough in the story. Hope you all would stick around)1) I hope you enjoy this story since it's only here as long as your people enjoy it. 2) I love feedback so I hope I'll get some from you. A comment, a PS , a collection anything goes. (It's a WPC entry so PS would be really appreciated)3) Rating: it's rated mature and the good stuff would come once we are through with the setting. I don't beat around the bush but I also don't like to head in straight. I would take time to develop relationships so that they hold meaning.4) Once again, I hope you all enjoy this and we have a nice journey ahead.

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Overall great novel, mixing systems with eastern fantasy. Writing quality could use some work such as tense mistakes and the like, but it's not too big of a deal. A proofreader or browser extension like Grammarly can do the trick with ease. Keep it up, author, looking forward to see where this story will go.

Quite well written although there is a ton of relationship drama, nothing unfixable and it's not extended needlessly so that's good. No ntr and harem is small but we'll done.

*sigh* looks like it ain’t ganna update soon ???

Hitsugaya and Kyoraku had pushed him to use it, despite the fact that he thought he could kill them without it. Soi Fon and Komamura were weak compared to most Captains, sadly Aizen had underestimated them. Soi Fon was fast enough to dodge him while Komamura kept rushing at him despite all the injuries he received.

"Are you okay, Mace? You're not yourself…"

Peter: tol buti at nagbago ang isip mo?

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Mu Zheng frowned, got up with a cold expression and took big steps towards the counter.