Disciple Of The Black Zenith, Lives Again? - Reviews

Lack of imagination leads to shallow writing quality and the author only cares about word count. The only good thing about this work is how easily it makes you sleep.

Reviewing gives me power.5 star shall be my superpower.Readers I shall overpower.This was my attempt at empower.Let me give you a flower.

Loving the fact that this story kicks off with a world transfer that doesn't actually involve the main character getting killed. He's an intellectual and that is my favorite type among all main character types. Gonna keep this in my library and hope that it updates regularly.Good job author!

I was only able to read the first chapter, but the base for the story is promising. The banter between the friends is relatable, and their dialogue flows well, which, to me; is a good sign for future chapters. The bus Scene is ?(I won’t say more because then it’ll be a spoiler?).There were a few present and past tense inconsistencies, but no grammatical errors or such that I found. All in all: both the work and author show high potential. Keep it going Author!❤️

Undying Cockroach (Level 1)

Much of the tension lifted from his body, and he looked up triumphantly at the clouds of rising smoke.

Viltus looks at them and laughs a little. After that, he says,

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"Altria, Ready?"

"what do you want?  you can't just come into people's houses and boss them around you jerk face? " patients yelled at the men standing in her front room, her father grip tighten around her body. "don't, he dangerous he could kill you in a blink of an eye" her father whispered.

Currently at chapter 175. At least this novel understands that even though MC is OP, he understands that he needs allies and they also need to be strong. Supporting characters aren't just a means to an end like using them, then they're just in the background. Combat scenes aren't that detailed which sometimes make it longer, but this is good in my opinion. The author is also making use of time right where the MC and friends take a break and train. As for the pacing of the story, I think it's just right. The author is making the MC strong fast to catch up to the frontline where the pacing will slow down. Overall, it's a good novel.

Looking forward to reading more... author sama please update!