dG - Reviews

Oh look, it has been another WHOLE month without an update. Keep up the amazing effort. At this rate you might finish by 2021. There is only 32 chapters left.

Haven't read it it yet, but the story seems promising. been kinda bored with other stories as they all follow the general plot line, with alot of plot armor. hopefully this isn't one of those stories.

who in there right mind would spent 140usd for a book from an unknown author equivalent to  a  670 page book when u can buy a hard cover book of 1000 pages from a famous author for 40usd and if u say this book is 670 chapters long  just rember a chapter in this book is only 1000 to 1500 characters long a hard cover book is 1000 to 1500 characters a page so this is highway robbery

After I finished the novel, I can say it was fun.The world's background is good, and the power system is fairly good.The biggest problem with the novel is the stupidity of most characters.Characters with limited intelligence and stupid behavior.The author should work more in terms of writing characters.I think that's all I have.

Thai is very good and quite funny, though would prefer if you fix your grammar mistakes, but overall quite a good read, though don't make the character too op too fast.

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Rachael look confuse, 'What school college doesn't start until next month'. She turns toward Tristan, she saw him smiling confidently and a strong firm looking facial expression. But she knows him too well, under that smile there is a message "Help me, please Help me".

"Lyra. Are you a nice person?"

(john):- mujhe apna pichhla janam yaad aa gaya.

From pale he became red, his head looked like a big strawberry and veins popped up on his forehead.

And as he emerged from the cradle, a chorus came from the surrounding Sentries outside, "There can only be one."

"If you want to get an idea, look," the old man told them and pointed to the place before them.