Devourer: Rise Beyond Celestial - Reviews

I wait for a long time to stack chapters, but it's been a year since a update, and that's fucking sad. keep up the good work. I hope you come back soon. Love this story.

Overall a pretty solid start to a novel. After reading the free chapters I can say it has set the stage excellently for a slow slice of life with a twist. The characters are realistic with quirks but not becoming stereotypes of caricatures . As for complaints its mostly minor things, there's rare but significant translation hiccups, the setting is mostly pretty uninspired, and there's only a limited number of chapters available currently. Otherwise the pacing is a little slow, and the MC does have a "system" of sorts which may be off putting to some.

In fact, for now I like the novel ... In short, it lacks a bit of grammar and has some errors (not as much as others I've seen, MY EYES ARE LOST ALMOST!) I think if you fix it and focus a little more outside the MC, also if you post more often haha all great (even if the latter is not necessary) thanks and excellent work.

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so far so good. mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

will this novel also have cross overs with epic of a caterpullar and demon queen rebirth i reincarnated as a living armor. love your works..

Even though his main focus was his profound energy he did not worry too much about this, because there was no hurry while he did not have the profound arts to practice with his energy which was something never before seen, the only way was to develop them by himself and to this required a surprising amount of understanding and analysis.

"Ini surat milikmu." Dengan bangganya ia memamerkan surat milik Lan itu.

Seeing the young man in black and silver, the crowd parted around him, almost falling over themselves as they tried to simultaneously run away and avoid hitting him. Some, the closest, saw the slender black blade of the sword, the scarlet glitter of rubies in the eyes of the leaping wolves, the emerald gleam of the stones in the snakes' eyes. They recognized the weapon.

"Your father is a huge prick without a doubt, so I do not blame you. Your 19 years of experience have made you very strong both mentally and spiritually. If you had let him kill you, you would be in heaven by now. That is why I am gonna offer you something that you and I will both like." the devil said as he released Alexander from the invisible force.

"Good" i annonce," Sit on the couch I'll only be a minute.

Currently  Xaio Chen's elder  cousin was beating him for fun and others even his sister were laughing . Then suddenly one of his cousin struck him with the rod and he fainted instantly . His cousin's and  his own sister , all of them got scared and left the yard while one of Xaio Chen's younger cousin sister who  liked him told her elders but all of them also thought  that  he had just fainted so they didn't pay attention not even his own parents came to see him . Then unintentionally his mom came to yard  and saw him lying in a pool of blood . Shocked to see this she urgently called her husband and he was taken to hospital . The doctor's were about to  declared him dead , but at the same time immortal Xaio Chen's soul was transferred into body of Xaio Chen on earth .