devotion || anakin skywalker [completed] - Reviews

Love the story in this book,really enjoy it

The beginning is quite interesting (the first chapters are 100-200). Then it gradually gets worse (IMHO)                                                         

The Story was good at the beginning but now it's just the Authors monologue. Lack of interaction between characters, the author is focusing more on soul star and soul star fragments, I mean who cares about reading numbers.

A very unique concept instead of usual mc getting killed by a ' truck- kun ' scenario..I'm just fed up of those now...let's talk about this story , the world background and the characterisation of the entities feels new  and fresh to me ..so I would recommend any new readers to give it a try as in my opinion you won't reget it.........

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It is very fun to read story .========================================================================================================================================================

The prologue created a nice atmosphere and also delivered a nice background as to what the story's gonna be. The author has exceptionally succeeded to raise my curiosity. So I hope he rolls out the later chapters fast....

Hi guys, the author here.This being my first work and am sure that it's lacking in many ways however I assure you that it's a very good story, it's for that reason that am rating it at a five.I implore you to give it a chance. Thank you.

"Tales of Kiran" is an exciting new addition to the fantasy genre. While the chapters may be short, they are packed with action and leave you eager for more. The world-building is impressive, creating a vivid and immersive backdrop for the story. The plot is developing well, showing promise and keeping readers intrigued with each new installment.Character design is solid, with well-developed personalities that enhance the narrative. Though the story is still new, the update stability has been consistent so far, which is a great sign for future releases.Overall, "Tales of Kiran" is off to a fantastic start. If you enjoy well-crafted fantasy worlds and engaging characters, this is definitely a story to follow. I have high hopes for its continued development!

*In the middle of the forest*

JK: Y/N!?

A hand on my shoulder, it was as cold as ice. The person standing there I never saw him in my entire life, but he looked so familiar. He was not alone ,there was someone standing ,maybe a couple.